10 WORDS · Language people can use
Fewer prerequisites, same truth.
You will learn how to make an explanation simpler without making it wrong, and a quick test to tell the difference. It takes 3 minutes.
Why is the sky blue?
Here's how an expert answers.
The expert answer
Rayleigh scattering by N₂ and O₂ molecules scales with λ⁻⁴, so diffuse skylight is dominated by short wavelengths.
It's correct. But to follow it, you need to know six things first: what scattering is, what N₂ and O₂ are, what λ means, what "to the minus four" does, what a wavelength is, and what diffuse skylight is.
Watch the clip
The clip tries two ways to make that answer simpler. One works. One doesn't.
The name for it
THE NAME FOR IT
ELI5: Explain Like I'm Five
From the online forum r/explainlikeimfive
Done right, ELI5 cuts the number of concepts you must already know. It keeps the real cause intact.
The easy mistake
Not ELI5: just wrong
The sky is blue because it reflects the ocean.
Cute. Wrong. And it can't explain anything else.
This is what people often think ELI5 means: say something short and cute. But a wrong answer isn't a simple version of the right one. It's a different answer.
The real thing
Keep the cause. Remove what the reader has to know in advance.
Fewer prerequisites
Sunlight is a mix of colors. Air molecules scatter short blue waves far more than long red ones. So blue reaches you from all over the sky.
Fewer still
Sunlight is every color mixed together. Air bounces blue light around much more than red. So wherever you look up, blue is bouncing toward you.
Look at the meters. The number of things you need to know drops from six to one. The real cause (air bounces blue light more than red) is still there in every version.
Test it
A real cause keeps working on new questions. A made-up one doesn't. So try this. Using only the last answer above, why are sunsets red?
Think about it before you open the answer.
Show the answer
At sunset, light crosses far more air to reach you. Most of the blue gets bounced away on the trip. Red is what's left.
Same cause, new question, and it still works. Now try the ocean story on sunsets. It has nothing to say.
TAKEAWAY
Remove prerequisites.
Never remove the truth.
Write your own
- Write the expert answer first.
- List what a reader must already know to follow it.
- Explain or remove items from that list, one at a time. Keep the cause.
- Test it: use your simple answer to predict something new. If it can't, you cut too much.
Ask your agent
"Explain like I'm five" often gets you the cute, wrong version. Ask for fewer prerequisites instead:
Explain the topic below so that someone with no background can follow it. Rules: - Keep the real cause or mechanism. Never swap it for a story that's easier but false. - Before you write, list the concepts the expert explanation assumes. Then reduce that list to one or two. - Use everyday words and one concrete example. - End with one new question your explanation can also answer, and answer it with the same cause. Topic: [paste here]
What good output looks like: a short explanation that still names the real cause, plus a second question it answers without new ideas.
Sources
- The name comes from the online forum r/explainlikeimfive, started in 2011.
- The physics: Rayleigh scattering. Air molecules scatter short wavelengths (blue) much more strongly than long ones (red). Scattering goes up with the inverse fourth power of the wavelength.